WRONG DELINQUENT
Okay bro allow me to say first off that ya boi DJ Delinquent is crazy wrong about one thing.
YOU DONT GOTTA SAMPLE TO MAKE THIS TRACK AMAZING.
My suggestion to this whole thing, which is pretty much what he was saying is that you need to change almost everything but the structure of the song. I think you structured this song bad ass like.
But unfortunately everything else must go. It lacks a certain diversity, but NO you dont gotta sample and for the fact you attempted this without sampling you are getting my 5. But check it I would really like to see you redo this, maybe add some strings a piano piece or better synth work.
Besides, Mr.Delinquent talks like that becuase he knows he is the best sampler in the HHM section prolly the best on NG. So I hope this helps out bro. Be cool.