OCON- Thugz Ambition Well.....hm....
Aight bro....hm....Your beat is nice...lyrics are..hm...need some thought. You started off pretty nice but after about the first 10 seconds I was just like..WTF. I think you should take this song back to the shop. I mean I am not knocking you but you need to work on this a bit more. Cut the lyrics cause yo ass cant rap, well atleast not on this track. The beat is too plain. I know you were trying to go for that smooth westside Mopp Deep type shit, but this didn't make it there. Maybe your song had a oil leak or something. Try mixing in some claps or Hihats. I think this song needs to have a strong melody. The bass is sweet...but it ends there. It seems to me like you just threw this shit together. I am not knocking yo shit, but compared to some of the other shit here at NG, you need to step yo game up son.